baka me mga poems kayong gusto ishare hehe ala lang

why don't you go first?

Hmmm, i can't write it all here.
Shakespheare's sonnets might be worth
some time to read.

Baka pwede 'yung ilan dito na maging kritiko o editor ng mga tula ko at ng kaibigan ko? Paki-private message na lang ako. Salamat. Kailangan lang talaga ng kaunting tulong.

Here's one of my own. Pinasa ko siya sa MP 10, pero ako lang ata ang naka-gets sa sarili kong gawa, LOL. . Parang ang labo daw kasi. Anyway, eto siya:

Para sa Kanyang Tinatawag Daw ng Bayan

Diba si Che Guevara ang idolo mo?
At asar na asar ka sa mga tao
Na suot ang t-shirt na may mukha nito
At di alam ang kanyang sinisimbolo

Madalas ka pang nakasuot ng pula
Naging paboritong kulay mo na nga ba?
Binabasa mo mga gawa ni Joma
Kaya ika’y nabansagang komunista

Pag wala ka, yung prof, tinatanong ako
“Asa rally po,” naman ang sasagot ko
ul**, buti lang umabot sa tres grade mo
Sa kaka-okray mo sa ating gobyerno

Pero alam mo, hinahangaan kita
Kahit ayokong magtungong Mendiola
Basta pare, lagi kang mag-iingat ha?
At hindi lang bayan ang kailangan ka

meron ako haiku

detestable crow
today alone you please me
black against the snow

Wishing For Someone

I sit in the shade
where I can see the treetops
turn into mountains—they’re not as high,
but just as beautiful.
The silhouettes meld into
the dark blue of the horizon.
Shadows play when they see the light
slash across the sky or
when the headlights pass by.

I watch the cars follow each other
in a procession of
sad, screeching tires.
People come and go;
they never get tired.
They chatter about hate
and love, in groups or in pairs,
and ignore the rumbles from above.

Two seconds from now, lightning
would strike once again—illuminating
the empty space beside me.
Heaven’s tears would fall,
almost in time with my own.


Actually, entry ko lang yan sa blog ko... ginawa kong freeverse...

Not bad, pare... puwede nang gawing kanta!

One of my favorite "haikus" - hindi ko nga lang alam kung sino nagsulat:
A bird dropped poopoo
into my eye; why oh why?
Thank god cows dont fly

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
~* Thank you *~ - by Valerie Ibasco (me!)

I'm thankful for I have a friend like you,
Without you, I wouldn't know what to do.

You brighten up my dark days,
In your own special ways.

Your charm and your smile,
Is seen already from a mile.

With your sweet and caringness,
I can proudly say, I am so blessed.

Though we are far away and apart,
Remeber, we're always together by mind
and heart.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

simple but yet so perfect for the one I wrote it, one of my best, actually *da best* friend: John David Dela Rosa.. mishu

jvbongalonta wrote:

Not bad, pare... puwede nang gawing kanta! One of my favorite "haikus" - hindi ko nga lang alam kung sino nagsulat: A bird dropped poopoo into my eye; why oh why? Thank god cows dont fly

cute!